Friday, March 24, 2006

TRANCE

I wander lonely in the frozen nights,
looking at my shadow in flickering lights.
I try to figure out what's up in my mind,
Longing for something, I can't find!

Look at the lake's running water
A serene scene which takes me farther.
The endless warmth in the moonlight,
All is well but something isn't right.

A familiar fragrance in the cold breeze,
These precious moments never tend to cease.
How I wish you were here beside me
Miles apart, still near to heart..

I look for you in the countless stars
The wait is so long as endless wars.
Wistful for one golden chance..
Will live forever in this Trance...

--Neo
24/3/06

Posted by neo at 1:46 PM

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13 comments:

  1. AnonymousSaturday, March 25, 2006 6:33:00 AM

    That was pretty nostalgic daa...Everytime i read the poem i recall the moments we spent together and feel like going back in time.....Kooooooooooool poem

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  2. AnonymousSunday, March 26, 2006 2:52:00 AM

    Awesome poem man ..
    seems as if u have put ur heart into words...
    Hats off 2 u man ...am really lost 4 words at this one ..
    ---aks

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  3. AnonymousSunday, March 26, 2006 12:10:00 PM

    well done
    its a sweet poem keep goin
    neo is a champ
    -divik

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  4. AnonymousMonday, March 27, 2006 5:54:00 AM

    u write poems too![;o]
    its really a nice poem![:)]

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  5. AnonymousSaturday, April 01, 2006 1:45:00 AM

    Good one man.. but lake doesn't have running water :D
    Otherwise, a really good one.

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  6. AWednesday, April 12, 2006 6:10:00 AM

    This one is the best

    A familiar fragrance in the cold breeze,
    These precious moments never tend to cease.
    How I wish you were here beside me
    Miles apart, still near to heart..

    How I wish ;)

    You've definitely improved..Haven't ya?
    Kothi:)

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  7. AnonymousThursday, May 11, 2006 2:45:00 AM

    Nice poem.....n the other ones too.....:)

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  8. AnonymousThursday, May 11, 2006 7:52:00 AM

    boyyyy!! you surprised me!!! I never knew that I've a friend who has a mind of John Keats..


    Keep going. Express your wonderful thoughts in the form of poems.

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  9. GuruMonday, June 19, 2006 8:56:00 PM

    Hi The One,
    U r poems are like the truth that is already there but needs to be searched, only the seeker gets it.
    Found ur poems link throuth Orkut and one single glance compelled me to read the entire breadth of ur poems, great going yaar, few lines just stand out and demand to be appreciated like the one from the Memory Remains........
    "So long as the Memory Remains" & the line "Tell the conscience to hide ur tears"
    Keep the gud work going, if u find enough time out of ur world of poems do visit my blog http://poemsofapoet.blogspot.com

    Hve a nice day,
    Tke care n Bye,
    Guru

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  10. GuruMonday, June 19, 2006 8:59:00 PM

    Hi Neo ( The One ),
    Ur poems were engrossing and cudnt help but read all of them. Few lines stand out for themselves and demand appreciation like the one in Memory Remains "So long as the Memory Remains" and the one "Tell the conscience to hide ur tears" great work yaar, keep the poems rolling.
    If u find enough time out of ur world of poems do visit my blog at http://poemsofapoet.blogspot.com
    Hve a nice day,
    Tke care n Bye,
    Guru

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  11. jasdeep mandiaWednesday, July 18, 2007 4:50:00 PM

    another great piece by neo.
    gd one.
    i loved the last lines.
    cheers!

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  12. VIDYAWednesday, January 30, 2008 12:10:00 AM

    Hey Naresh,thanks for commenting on my blog ,Pensieve.

    Your poems are beautiful...'specially trance...apt title...
    Keep blogging!

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  13. AnonymousSunday, December 13, 2009 5:20:00 PM

    Major respect..made my eyes water.

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