Tuesday, August 08, 2006

ALONE AGAIN

There was no genuine reason,
To end the sweet friendship season.
Is it so easy for someone to lose?
Are you happy the way you choose?

Tell me why I was banished.
Like a fading dream you got vanished.
Can I be the one like I was before?
Will my heart beat for others anymore?

The phone rings, not in the same tune
The Coffee Day just lost its way.
All such great time ended so soon
Only to land on the dark side of moon.

I will cherish our moments mate
I wish, for you it wasn't a game.
It's not right to merely call it Fate
For the last time I take all your blame.

Is there a definite healing
To soothe a deep hurt feeling?
Nothing now does make any sense
As if everything has lost its meaning.

I dont know why
but now i can't cry.
No matter how much I try
There's none with me to fly.

I stand here drenched in rain
To hide my tears and endure the pain.
I walk down in this silent lane
Yes I know I'm alone again.

-Neo

10 comments:

  1. i hav a doubt.. coffee day ki enni sarlu vellaru??
    nyways.. nice poem... (as usual)

    ---archana

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  2. hey ,, why r u alone man!!
    main hoon na......
    har sunday milenge madhapur coffe day aur pizza hut me...

    ... bhanu....

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  3. Good work boss...
    but no need to worry man as these things happen n part of life game...

    vijay

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  4. one way or the other i feel that ur poems depict my own story may b its d same wid every one , but ur poem really gives a glance into my past and i really appreciate it
    good work neo ......keep going
    - divik

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  5. Hey Neo.. come on man, i thought you knew better.. seriously "alone again" is anytime better than having to be the one "living a lie"..think about it..you'd deserve better than this anytime..

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  6. i need now say its well written and very emotional.
    all i want to say is "best of luck"
    cheers!

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  7. I hesitated to leave a comment, bcos thought it was too late, then remembered a great poet saying this "A poet writes what he feels at that time and the reader shld feel the same". Arguably the best poem in this blog so far. Very emotional one. I don't want to quote some lines and dig the past. Hope time took care of everything. Keep rocking buddy.. :D

    P.S. Those ryhmes are tooo good..

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  8. I dont know why
    but now i can't cry.
    No matter how much I try
    There's none with me to fly.


    kind of very funny...

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  9. A good poet/ writer is the one who makes the reader feel the emotion in it. u've definitely made me feel it.

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