'Hey You' out there on the road
Sitting lonely in the cold..
Why can't You 'run', Why don't You walk?
Why don't You scream, Why can't you talk?
I know You Boy, You are not dumb
or have You become 'Comfortably Numb' ?
Take this boy; Fills You with Fire
You won't feel pain, no fear, no desire..
Trust me Boy; it will all end soon
Taking You to the 'Dark Side Of Moon'..
Is it Heavy inside? You feel like drowning..
Is there no one for You to 'Keep Talking'?
Do You see the Eclipse on the Sun?
Hands on the Gun, So badly You wanna run !!
Stay with me Boy, its 'Us and Them'
They are far ahead; They are far gone.
Don't kill 'Time', Calling out different Name
Know that They all are relatively same...
The wait is over..They had their chance,
You can Win now, Take your stance..
Make sure You don't play Their ugly game
Coz We are Us; We are not Them..
The darkness is so still; Night so long
Guess We should now break our song..
Come Back to Life; The sun will rise
To 'Shine on You Crazy Diamond'...
-Neo
18/06/08
PS: This poem is my humble attempt to pay my tribute to Pink Floyd, the music band which influenced me the most.. The words in bold are some of the album names of that band..
Hang on..There's more..This poem truly depicts my state of mind..only if u can understand ;)
Sitting lonely in the cold..
Why can't You 'run', Why don't You walk?
Why don't You scream, Why can't you talk?
I know You Boy, You are not dumb
or have You become 'Comfortably Numb' ?
Take this boy; Fills You with Fire
You won't feel pain, no fear, no desire..
Trust me Boy; it will all end soon
Taking You to the 'Dark Side Of Moon'..
Is it Heavy inside? You feel like drowning..
Is there no one for You to 'Keep Talking'?
Do You see the Eclipse on the Sun?
Hands on the Gun, So badly You wanna run !!
Stay with me Boy, its 'Us and Them'
They are far ahead; They are far gone.
Don't kill 'Time', Calling out different Name
Know that They all are relatively same...
The wait is over..They had their chance,
You can Win now, Take your stance..
Make sure You don't play Their ugly game
Coz We are Us; We are not Them..
The darkness is so still; Night so long
Guess We should now break our song..
Come Back to Life; The sun will rise
To 'Shine on You Crazy Diamond'...
-Neo
18/06/08
PS: This poem is my humble attempt to pay my tribute to Pink Floyd, the music band which influenced me the most.. The words in bold are some of the album names of that band..
Hang on..There's more..This poem truly depicts my state of mind..only if u can understand ;)
nice way to pay your tribute.
ReplyDeleteThanks juned..but to tell you, there's a lot more inner meaning to this poem, which i have encoded in Pink Floyd words ;)
ReplyDeletewow!
ReplyDeleteits a kind in itself.
thanks jassi..i understand that u got its meaning :)
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ReplyDeletehiii this is kiranmai(the anonymous admirer..hehe).Woww man..u deserve all veneration(remunaration too) that a professional poet get!!truly awesome.and Wats wit des codes!!not snooping..juz got curious.[:)]
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ReplyDeleteThanks..
Just can't dig out the meaning here..I m sure a majority cant decipher this in this way..
I wud love to explain each and every line in length but thats precisely what i cant do now..
may b some day i will b bold enuf to speak it vehemently..until then...:)
Neo
HEY buddy
ReplyDeletei think even pink floyd wud be proud abt these poem.the way u presented it in a very pink floydish way n depicted ur own life is commendable...
Hai Neo,
ReplyDeleteNice poem ra, its really motivating not just for the Pink Floyd but to all who can make out its meaning....ya we should never give up n always fight back....
Nice work dude...keep it up.....
Don't know that Pink Floyd band....but nice lines.
ReplyDeleteHow many times I read, I feel like..am missing something that u want to convey.
"Don't kill 'Time', calling out different name
Know that They all are relatively same..."
Nice work.
Lit the fire inside.
Hiii.....
ReplyDeleteReading again, made it clear a bit. Yet, I miss something.
U r pulling urself out!
Nice one dood. Only a authentic Floyd fan can get you :)
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ReplyDeletegud work neo.... seems recondite though!!!
ReplyDeleteluved these lines.....
The wait is over...They had their chance,
You can Win now, Take your stance..
Make sure You dont play Their ugly game
Coz We are Us, We are not Them..
nice poem!!!
ReplyDeleteu r a true fan :-)
Owesome Neo !!
ReplyDeletetruely i read this peom many times.. and i got inspired too.
MK.
nice...
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