Sunday, August 28, 2005

I'M THERE

Shut your eyes and ask your heart
whom to adore and whom to ignore?
The one you trusted was so mean..
Has deserted you and never then seen..

Past was past, try to forget,
lest it lasts and make you regret.
Be it a dream which never came true,
Bring a gleam to leave no clue.

The world around is very insane.
Don't you bother and weep in vain.
A gust of wind will blow again,
to bring a change and take your pain.

Life is a blend of dark and light,
A ray of hope comes after every night.
These words of mine may not sound great..
certainly, i am not the one you hate.

You can share your fears with me,
You can shed your tears with me.
I do this all for the one i care,
Think of me and i will be there.

-NEO

ps: This was an effort of mine to console one of my fren who was going thru a bad phase in life

5 comments:

  1. I like this one more than the others that you've written. May be thats because I kinda connect with this particular one at a personal level. Good one kothi ;)

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  2. I like this one more than the others that you've written. May be thats because I kinda connect with this particular one at a personal level. Good one kothi ;)

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  3. so, u were talking about this poem when you gave comments to my poem "i "ll be there for u"
    gd one.
    after knowing the background, i was able to relate it to my poem "i "ll erase". this poem i wrote for a frnd who did the job of an eraser like u.
    cheers! for both of u.

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  4. Be it a dream which neame true,

    "neame" kya hota hai?

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  5. Gud 1...simple n precise but speaks a lot...really u r 1 who vl b always thr wid a kickkk :)....coz u gave entry as my frn at very crct time :) as my *A* ;)

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